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kairi's wrath: her lost loveIt was a cold winter day but I wasnt cold ,a perk of being a fire naga. I went to visit Tanya in her new place and glomp her, but when i arrived I sensed somthing was wrong. I slithered inside the farm house , the door was left open and it was oddly quiet. usually Tanya would have jumped me by now somthing was very wrong, when searching downstairs turned up nothing I went upstairs nothing again.As I slithered along I noticed a presence something not mortal, I found the source, puching through the ceiling grabbing someone by the neck and dragging them down."you! explain now! where is Tanya and the others" I demanded the creature replied in a raspy voice "I dont know." the fear evident in her eyes , I threw the creature against the wall she pleeded " I don't know, honest. please dont erase me, I've been good I haven't done anything yet" I tightend me grip around her neck I then gathered a lot of fire in my palm and incinerated her in a burst of flame she screeched and scream in her ras