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Tonight you gave me a fraight pretty lady.
What are doing alone on this dark night?
Let me take you home, you look at me with worryfull eyes
I look down and see a cut, oh this is nothing
you cling to me. I hold you up and you begin to lean up like your trying to kiss me.
Suddenly, I feel a sharp pain on my neck she's there. I think "oh she's a vampire" I hold her tightly and say "drink all you need cute little vampire."

She jumps back in shock! as if she didn't expect me to know what she was." it's alright if your hungry" I say "please continue if you want" as I say this I embrace her again. she reluctantly continues I pick her up and carry her as she feeds from me.

She stops a bit when she notices I am moving "where are you taking me she mews" in reply I say "I am taking you home with me, I assume that your alone and dont have a home" she looks down in shame.

"It's okay you can feed from me from now on if you want" I kiss her blood covered lips. " In my oppinion a vampire feeding is the most primal and sensual thing you can do that should only be done with your lover" the cute vampire girl blushes

I ask her "whats your name?"  "blair" she mews
"well blair then I'll be your lover I'll be with you for my lifetime. So don't be scared of prosicution I'll protect you"  she smiles as we walk into the night.      
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this is a short vampire story i just came up with although originally it was meant as a poem but changed lol
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Very nice. I always like a vampire love story. Especially between two girls.

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I love a story with a happy ending.
Poor Tanya is quite jealous!

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"If you can read this-you're treading on my tail!"
lol why is that

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Tanya-"I'd love to have someone who loved me like that! Someone I could hold close at night and nip!"

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"If you can read this-you're treading on my tail!"
Tanya-"No one has ever asked ME to go home with them. Well-except for that pedo but he doesn't count!"

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"If you can read this-you're treading on my tail!"
aawww *hugs its alright*

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any questions or request are to sent to me by note
Tanya-"Nobody loves me! Just because I'm a power-mad, bloodsuker!"

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"If you can read this-you're treading on my tail!"
*holds Tanya* aaww there there *strokes head lays her head on my shoulder with my neck obviously exposed* ^^

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any questions or request are to sent to me by note
*Tanya nips you so gently you barely feel it*

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